I have not really sat down and processed my school year yet. This was really my first experience doing that. I have always had this one experience in my mind since it has happened and that is what this story is about.
It was difficult for me to find images that fit well into the story. I first wrote the script and I knew what I wanted, but finding creative common and copyright free images are difficult when you are creating a full length story without your own images.
I used WeVideo to create and edit the entire video.
"My One Goal"
By Dmitry Bucklin
Hey Dmitry!
ReplyDeleteI loved the video. I think you did very well talking openly about, and perhaps processing, feelings a lot of us share but are maybe too afraid to talk about because of divisions in opinions. I think it's a big topic and you handled it well without stumbling into anything that could set off one side or the other of those divided opinions.
As to things that could be improved, I agree with you about finding images, that's a huge challenge (I struggle with that all the time trying to find the right images for work and sometimes you just have to make do with what you have). I'm not sure in this short time frame there would be much else to do to improve that, but perhaps if there was more time or you had access to your classroom, you could take some photos or videos that would more closely visualize your story. While I understand where you were coming from and why you chose to use the images that were like "graphics," sometimes those pulled me out of the story because I was trying to figure out what it meant, or how it related. Like the construction site / Pandemic Precautions graphic threw me off.
I think your story and the scripting were great and I loved the words you chose to put up on the screen to reinforce the story.
The only other thing I think could be improved would be the audio quality. In some places there is a background "hiss" that may have to do with the mic you used to record was picking up some ambient noise. But that's just a minor thing.
I think overall it's a great well thought out video!
Thank you for the great feedback! Yes, I noticed that hiss sound as well. I will try to see what I can do about that. Also, I will look into adjusting some of the images so it doesn't take you out of the story. Thanks!
DeleteDmitry,
DeleteAmazing job. As a teacher, I could really relate to your story. Your ability to be open and honest with your students is such an important thing, especially during this time. It was a rough year, and for teachers, I agree with you that the relationships I built with my students this year were stronger than ever.
Your voice throughout your story was very strong, and clear and you did a great job getting your story and point out there. I enjoyed the music and graphics and thought it added well to your story. After watching your video, I am excited to look into WeVideo to see what it has to offer. I am curious, some of your moving graphics (the construction or the moving thought bubbles).. where did you find those? I thought they helped keep the reader engaged.
I really enjoyed the part of your story where you were discussing the students feelings. You did a great job encompassing those emotions in the image as it moved from one word to another. It helped to build emotions in your listener, and from a teacher like me, it helped me remember some of my students and the discussions we've had this past year.
Great job, keep up the awesome work!
Also, the above comment is Kelsey Mitchelson... I don't know why it doesn't always post my name! :(
DeleteHi Dmitry,
ReplyDeleteThis was extremely powerful storytelling. This reflection of such an incredible year is something all teachers should see. You demonstrated the hard moments and the powerful teaching moments. Your students are lucky to have a teacher that teaches with compassion and honesty. To stop and take a moment to care is impactful and what those students needed.
The music was the only thing I was curious about at times. Maybe something quiet and consistent. Honestly, it is really challenging for me to critique this. The story was so impactful that I am at a loss of words. Excellent job!
Dmitry,
ReplyDeleteI loved the background music you used; however, it seemed kind of loud in relation to your voice. A suggestion would be to lower the volume of the music and sounds in the background.
Next, I really enjoyed listening to your story about the year you had and the impact that you had on your students. You told the story using an good pace. At times you had great expression, but something you could try is to adjust your pace along with the story so it adds some more feeling.
Thanks again for sharing such an incredible time in your life. One you'll never forget.
Dmitry,
ReplyDeleteI loved the background music you used; however, it seemed kind of loud in relation to your voice. A suggestion would be to lower the volume of the music and sounds in the background.
Next, I really enjoyed listening to your story about the year you had and the impact that you had on your students. You told the story using an good pace. At times you had great expression, but something you could try is to adjust your pace along with the story so it adds some more feeling.
Thanks again for sharing such an incredible time in your life. One you'll never forget.
Dmitry,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this video for many reasons. One, the connection I have to it. Your opening really brought us into the story and set the tone to the rest of the video. Your variety of graphics matched the story.
One thing you could consider is to turn down the background music just a little. I used headphones and it overpowered your voice at some points. I had to turn down the volume. I do like the choice of background music, it really fit the video.
The sound effects also added element to the story, I would prehaps balance those out, since it overlaps.
Great work!